Wednesday, October 21, 2020
My Animals
4 weeks ago my - year old cat had 3 kittens 1 died two stayed alive I was sad that our kitten died. My cat kottero had the kittens under the house because My Mum wouldn't let my cat in the house so she went under the house. Me my brother Rongomai, Our friend Phenix, and I was looking for our kittens we finally found them they were under the house by the door. My other 1 - year old cat had kittens she had 3 kittens none of them died that was a relief But when I went into My Mum and Dads room My Dad told Me to look on the other side of the bed in was so happy for the kittens But My Mum and Dad are deciding to give all My cats away. We have 2 dogs one we got before my other dog Tuto and my other dog name is Kujo they are really clumsy But not clumsier then Me But I was playing with one of My dogs and I had a rope in My hand and I held The rope up well I'm on the cheer My dog just jumped on Me and scratched My Knee. My other dog called Tuto tripped Me up well we were walking them and then I scraped another knee. My cats are both 1 years old. 





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I can see you really love animals. This report on your pets made me remember my experiences as a young girl. Remember in writing to plan your main ideas and to use paragraphs for them. Using headings can help such as New Kittens My Dogs Mishaps and Moves. Lastly, what can you tell me about your punctuation for the second half of your writing?
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