Labour Day

My Animals

4 weeks ago my  - year old cat had 3 kittens 1 died two stayed alive I was sad that our kitten died. My cat kottero had the kittens under the house because My Mum wouldn't let my cat in the house so she went under the house. Me my brother Rongomai, Our friend Phenix, and I was looking for our kittens we finally found them they were under the house by the door. My other 1 - year old cat had kittens she had 3 kittens none of them died that was a relief But when I went into My Mum and Dads room  My Dad told Me to look on the other side of the bed in was so happy for the kittens But My Mum and Dad are deciding to give all My cats away. We have 2 dogs one we got before my other dog Tuto and my other dog name is Kujo they are really clumsy But not clumsier then Me But I was playing with one of My dogs and I had a rope in My hand and I held The rope up well I'm on the cheer My dog just jumped on Me and scratched My Knee. My other dog called Tuto tripped Me up well we were walking them and then I scraped another knee.  My cats are both 1 years old.  

Kirianas creative writing.

I've learned that using different ideas in my writing, as well as using sequencing words that I used, and not to over detail my work too much. I feel proud about adding detail such as seeing, smell, hear, and feelings.