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Thursday, December 2, 2021

The storm!!!

 Jesus stopped a storm without being afraid saying STOP they were on a boat that he was riding!!! let there be sun and no rain, come before me as I say this.🛥

Jesus showed courage by not being afraid to stop a storm with his mouth just saying STOP!!! The storm stopped after a few seconds, then they started fishing again.

In summary, Jesus was pretty brave in stopping the storm by himself and not having to be scared of it. Jesus just stopped it, when he stopped it, it was like magic and the people that he was sailing with were like wow by the looks on their faces.


Wednesday, November 17, 2021

Be a Courageous person!

 Virtue is a great quote because it has high moral standards. In class, we are learning about courage and how to be courageous, and being whakawhanuangatanga. I learned those good posters are eyecatching and Motivational. 

Thursday, November 4, 2021

Writing GOals

My Writing Goals 


Not yet

Developing

Got it! 


My story and sentences make sense

I have a hook

I have characters and setting, problem and solution

I have some direct speech

I have used “ “ ! ? , . correctly

I have used wow words (verbs, adjectives, nouns)

I have some figurative language ( simile, personification)


I have used show not tell (inference)


Different kinds of sentence types and lengths 2A, BOYS sentence,-ed sentence   3 bad - 


My writing goals are...

To plan my work so it has orientation (character and setting) problem and solution.

To use different sentence types and punctuation.


Wednesday, October 27, 2021

Courage

 In class we have been learning about, courageous people and how they are courageous. Courage means the ability to do something that frightens one; bravery. 

Thursday, October 21, 2021

 

Credible-believable

 Great authors make characters with believable personalities they show personalities through this Dialogue ( direct speech ), Actions, Reactions, physical description, and thoughts.

I can see in Beans character: He is rude, obnoxious and he is a shameful person. 

Beans is rude and obnoxious cause he sticks his finger in the chocolate ice cream without asking and shoves his finger down his mouth and his finger came out spotlessly clean. I would never do this cause it is totally the rudess thing that I have ever heard of.